Thursday, February 18, 2010

My Alpha Flight limited series script...

A while back, when Marvel and DC Comics were still taking scripts from unknown writer I came up with and indea of doing a Alpha Flight limited series script. The reason I picked Alpha Flight was that they are such a CRAPPY team they could use a readly good reconcept from the ground up.  I tied in the concept in to a VERY CRAPPY run on of Captain America villian called Protocide.  I have attached the free three pages of script dialoge that I wrote for the series.  Enjoy!



PAGE 1 - Opening chase scene with McIntyre

PANEL ONE
Medium shot. You are looking at Clinton McIntyre formally known as Protocide, as if you are looking at him on a TV monitor, as he is running for his life in the back alleys streets of some urban metropolis. He has several chemical darts that are sticking in his skin as he looks panicked and afraid of this situation.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER CAPTION:
Epsilon Seven to Epsilon Five, we have the target on grid. Sector G 12. He’s moving fast.

EPSILON FIVE LEADER CAPTION:
Roger. We shot enough tranquilizers to stop two bull elephants and he shrugged it off like it was nothing. We have four operatives down. Three of them are in serious condition.

PANEL TWO
Medium Shot. Looking through a TV monitor, Clinton McIntyre is jumping over a chain link fence in the back alleyway.

EPSILON FIVE LEADER CAPTION:
We are also going to need clean-up on the site.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER CAPTION:
Housekeeping has already been alerted and dispatched. Epsilon One, Three, and Six converge on Sector G 14 to cut him off. Use full tranquilizers on him. We need him minimally damaged and alive.


PANEL THREE
Medium Shot. Looking through a TV monitor, McIntyre is still running in the back alley.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER CAPTION:
All Epsilon groups be advised the target’s ground speed has increased to 50 mph.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER CAPTION:
Epsilon Three the target should reach your location in 20 seconds. Prepare a full spread of darts.

EPSILON THREE LEADER CAPTION:
Confirmed and ready.


PANEL FOUR
Medium Shot. Looking through a TV monitor, McIntyre is being fired on by Epsilon operatives in crimson and black colored protective body armor from various locations in the alley. Several more darts hit McIntyre all over his body.

MCINTYRE:
AARRGGHH!!

EPSILON THREE LEADER CAPTION:
Target engaged. Full spread.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER CAPTION:
Epsilon One and Six converge on Three’s location and provide support. Three keep firing and press your advantage.


PANEL FIVE
Medium Shot. Looking a TV monitor, McIntyre acrobatically leaps up to a fire escape and moves to the roof.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER CAPTION:
Be advised, target has left street level and is moving to the roof top. Epsilon Two be prepare, we driving him right to you.

EPSILON TWO LEADER CAPTION:
We are prepared and ready to go, Team Leader Seven.


PAGE 2 - Chase scene with McIntyre

PANEL 1
Medium Shot. Looking through a TV monitor, McIntyre is running and leaping rooftop to rooftop to continue his evasion of the people after him.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER CAPTION:
Three continue pursuit. Epsilon Two, be advised the target will be at your location in less than 40 seconds.

EPSILON TWO LEADER CAPTION:
All operatives in place. Non-lethal ordinance is operational and ready.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER CAPTION:
Fire at will.


PANEL 2
Medium Shot. Looking through a TV monitor, While jumping from rooftop to rooftop, McIntyre is hit by a large metal net. It sends an electrical charge through the net shocking him.

MCINTYRE:
AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!!

EPSILON TWO LEADER CAPTION:
Target is hit. Pressing attack to subdue target.


PANEL 3
Medium Shot. Looking through a TV monitor, McIntyre falls to the next rooftop still covered by the electrical net.

MCINTYRE:
UUMMPPHH!


PANEL 4
Medium Shot. Looking through a TV monitor, McIntyre is getting hit from all sides by energy based weapons that

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER CAPTION:
Target is down. All Epsilon teams close in and continue to suppress target.

MCINTYRE:
NO!!! AAAARRRRGGGGHHHH!!!!


PANEL 5
Close up shot. Looking through a TV monitor, McIntyre’s face in extreme agony and pain.

MCINTYRE:
NO!!! I WON’T LET A.I.M. USE ME AGAIN!!!!!


PAGE 3 - McIntyre captured by the Epsilons

PANEL 1
Medium Shot. Looking through a TV monitor, several of the Epsilon operatives are near McIntyre firing at him with their energy rifles.

EPSILON TWO LEADER CAPTION:
Target is nearly subdued. Get air transport ready for target evac.

MCINTYRE:
NO!!! PLEASE!!!!! DON’T DO…. uh…..


PANEL 2
Medium Shot. Looking through a TV monitor, McIntyre is unconscious with several of the Epsilon operative around getting him ready for transport.

EPSILON TWO LEADER CAPTION:
Target subdued and contained. What are your next orders?


PANEL 3
Wide Shot. This is inside a very hi-tech location with several widescreen view screens, numerous computers and a large staff some dressed very professional and others dressed in military. Lots of people working and movement going on in the image.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER:
Good work. All Epsilon Teams back to the rendezvous point for egress.

EPSILON TWO LEADER (OVER THE RADIO):
Roger that, Epsilon Seven. See you back at the ranch.

SUBORDINATE:
Jesus, we are lucky this guy wasn’t armed. He could have killed a lot of people.


PANEL 4
Medium Shot. The focus of this panel is Epsilon Seven Leader and his subordinate. They are dressed in military style uniforms working at their computers and looking at widescreen monitors.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER:
With his skills and abilities, he could have killed everyone without breaking a sweat.

SUBORDINATE:
So who is this guy?

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER:
It’s classified above our pay grade.


PANEL 5
Close up shot on Epsilon Seven Leader and the subordinate.

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER:
But the rumor is he was supposed to be the original person the super soldier serum was tested on.

SUBORDINATE:
WHAT? You mean the serum that made Captain America?

EPSILON SEVEN LEADER:
Yep. This guy was the prototype for Captain America.

SUBORDINATE:
Captain America, huh. Well, welcome to Canada.

Talk to you later...